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04/01/11: April Fools

Just kidding (about this). I'd never let somebody else write my fics. :P I have too much fun writing them myself.

So here's the real chapter one of the Morphic sequel. Enjoy!

UPDATE EDIT: I made a new splash. It is spectacularly uninteresting, but a new splash nonetheless.

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sands buisle
Commenting on: 04-01-11

I knew the last one wasn't real, I had suspected that you'd do an april fools chapter (I just thought it was going to be tqftl), I'm also certain that this is another April fools joke.

[02/04/2011 06:51:42]

Butterfree
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Commenting on: 04-01-11

Kratos: Oh, wow. I laughed way too much at that. My sense of humour, it is refined.



Fixed it, in any case. I can't believe I (and everyone else) didn't notice that before.

[02/04/2011 04:09:23]

Splasher
Commenting on: 04-01-11

Nice splash!

[02/04/2011 04:03:24]

Kratos
Commenting on: 04-01-11

I finally got around to marathoning through Morphic and the extras in their entirety at stupid-o-clock this morning, so now I can enjoy all this additional stuff.



I'm a bit too busy to go into extravagant detail about how much I enjoyed it all right now, but… I enjoyed it! :D This new first chapter (amusing as Espeon's version was… pffft Mia) was also quite the interesting read. Figured I should point this out, though:



"Goddamn it. He was fucking scientist. He could do this sensibly."



Much as I'm sure Dave would like to be fucking scientist, especially if Scientist('s wife) could be Cheryl, I do believe you're missing an article there.

[02/04/2011 03:20:03]

Butterfree
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Commenting on: 04-01-11

"Pregnant pause" is itself a known phrase.



Fixed the typo; thanks. :D

[02/04/2011 01:43:14]

Venomoth
Commenting on: 04-01-11

"There was a pregnant pause."

You probably mean this in the phrase "pregnant with meaning," and it is valid, but still strange.

"figmenet of Lucy’s imagination"

A misspelling: It should be spelled "figment."

Otherwise, an enjoyable chapter of a great, realistic fanfic. Although it seems ridiculous now, it is sure to become more coherent later. The fact that Bubbles was so…enthusiastically devout is a clever foreshading to the reveal that it belonged to Isaac Daniels.

[02/04/2011 01:31:19]

Blastoise
Commenting on: 04-01-11

…another joke?



Because I don't think you would inject that much deconstruction into your real sequel. I may be wrong, though.



[02/04/2011 01:27:11]

Butterfree
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Commenting on: 04-01-11

Of course not. It was perfectly grammatically coherent, just ridiculous. And delightfully out of character because Espeon has never read Morphic.

[02/04/2011 00:54:06]

person
Commenting on: 04-01-11

@superbird absolutely not. remember the kissing ten TWELVE year olds? :'D



also, was the april-fools-joke morphic chapter run through google translate a couple of times before being posted, because i think it may have been…

[02/04/2011 00:43:25]

Superbird
Commenting on: 04-01-11

…Thought so. That last one didn't make any sense.



…I'm remembering the tQFtL April Fool's thing last year. Was that really so far back?

[01/04/2011 23:08:46]

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