I finally got around to marathoning through Morphic and the extras in their entirety at stupid-o-clock this morning, so now I can enjoy all this additional stuff.
I'm a bit too busy to go into extravagant detail about how much I enjoyed it all right now, but… I enjoyed it! :D This new first chapter (amusing as Espeon's version was… pffft Mia) was also quite the interesting read. Figured I should point this out, though:
"Goddamn it. He was fucking scientist. He could do this sensibly."
Much as I'm sure Dave would like to be fucking scientist, especially if Scientist('s wife) could be Cheryl, I do believe you're missing an article there.
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I knew the last one wasn't real, I had suspected that you'd do an april fools chapter (I just thought it was going to be tqftl), I'm also certain that this is another April fools joke.
Kratos: Oh, wow. I laughed way too much at that. My sense of humour, it is refined.
Fixed it, in any case. I can't believe I (and everyone else) didn't notice that before.
Nice splash!
I finally got around to marathoning through Morphic and the extras in their entirety at stupid-o-clock this morning, so now I can enjoy all this additional stuff.
I'm a bit too busy to go into extravagant detail about how much I enjoyed it all right now, but… I enjoyed it! :D This new first chapter (amusing as Espeon's version was… pffft Mia) was also quite the interesting read. Figured I should point this out, though:
"Goddamn it. He was fucking scientist. He could do this sensibly."
Much as I'm sure Dave would like to be fucking scientist, especially if Scientist('s wife) could be Cheryl, I do believe you're missing an article there.
"Pregnant pause" is itself a known phrase.
Fixed the typo; thanks. :D
"There was a pregnant pause."
You probably mean this in the phrase "pregnant with meaning," and it is valid, but still strange.
"figmenet of Lucy’s imagination"
A misspelling: It should be spelled "figment."
Otherwise, an enjoyable chapter of a great, realistic fanfic. Although it seems ridiculous now, it is sure to become more coherent later. The fact that Bubbles was so…enthusiastically devout is a clever foreshading to the reveal that it belonged to Isaac Daniels.
…another joke?
Because I don't think you would inject that much deconstruction into your real sequel. I may be wrong, though.
Of course not. It was perfectly grammatically coherent, just ridiculous. And delightfully out of character because Espeon has never read Morphic.
@superbird absolutely not. remember the kissing ten TWELVE year olds? :'D
also, was the april-fools-joke morphic chapter run through google translate a couple of times before being posted, because i think it may have been…
…Thought so. That last one didn't make any sense.
…I'm remembering the tQFtL April Fool's thing last year. Was that really so far back?