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♥ Melcharge ♥

This story is absolutely adorable. I fully expected Butterfree to leave at the end, but the fact he didn't made this so sweet and wholesome. I read this years ago and could have sworn he did leave, but I'm probably misremembering.

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In response to: post by ♥ Melcharge ♥

You may have read the old version, but Butterfree didn't leave in that one either; the tone of the ending was more bittersweet, though, so that may be why you felt like Butterfree had left at the end. (In the old version, the narrator hadn't had this proper realization that the problem was they should have communicated properly about this dynamic and what they each wanted, and the narrator thus ended up still unsure whether Butterfree was truly happy to be with them, though they ended up sort of forcibly convincing themselves they had to be.)

♥ Melcharge ♥

This story is absolutely adorable. I fully expected Butterfree to leave at the end, but the fact he didn't made this so sweet and wholesome. I read this years ago and could have sworn he did leave, but I'm probably misremembering.

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