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Sorry, but no.
1. Will could never play Peter's role in chapter 13, because Will can't dodge bullets.
2. If you meant merely switching which of them actually dies, Will is a better character to kill than Peter exactly because he is so completely powerless. Having him standing around the entire chapter and surviving it would just result in his presence feeling extraneous and his survival unrealistic, whereas killing him is that much more heartbreaking because he should never have been there in the first place. Peter made himself useful; if he died it would be a heroic sacrifice. The whole point of Will's death was that it was utterly pointless, and that's what hits Jack the heaviest. Peter dying would not have the same impact in this regard.
3. The only one of the villains who would make any sort of a sick pun is Isaac, who doesn't actually get there until after Will and Peter have both been taken out. The others were all nervous, frantic and had no idea what they were doing - not exactly conductive to puns. Rearranging the situation heavily just so the villain can be in a position to make a pun is not something I do, largely because I dislike puns.
4. What does it honestly change that your favorite character died? It's the second-to-last chapter of the fic; if he'd lived it would only have meant one extra scene for him (and probably a rather depressing one at that, since his life sucks and his siblings hate him and unfortunately a brush with death wouldn't change that). If you want to imagine he didn't die, be my guest, but I don't see how it would help you any if the rewrite changed it, honestly.
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Ok… first off, this glitch is crazy and cool to know about, so thanks for making this article thing to let more people know about it.
But can i just say somehing? This is very unrelated to the mew glitch, but I really hate how you kept saying things along the lines of "kids with no capacity for awareness" or "clumsy kids", and acting like kids are just stupid little clueless idiots who can barely think intelligent thoughts. You kept saying things that made it sound like you think kids could never possibly figure something out on their own, which I really hate. And also, when you were talking about how grammatically incorrect and childish-sounding one of the original mew glitch posts was, you automatically assumed a child had made the post. You do realize that MANY adults or young adults often are gramatically incorrect when posting online and may sound a bit childish? You do realize that MANY adults might accidentally stumble across this glitch and not think twice about what's behind it? As a 13 y/o "child" who does NOT have the IQ of a rock, I found all of this very insulting and rude. Not all - no, MOST kids aren't dumb and ignorant, you know, and it's very rude for you to say things that make it sound like we all are.
Adults can overlook things, too. Adults can be ignorant. Adults can sound childish online, because that's just how they type.
Who knows, maybe it was all kids who discovered the glitch and made the posts. But I still just hate how you're making us sound stupid and beneath you.
I'm sorry, i didn't mean to rant, and this is very irrelevant to the mew thing, but while reading this I was just getting very pissed and needed to say something.
The List Generator doesn't include Z-A's Lumiose or Hyperspace Dexes as order options.
What a great website, its great to see amazing websites are still around!!!
this whole idea is incredibly cool! its amazing that you thought of all this!
The Gen IV locations page for Iron Island (B3F) incorrectly says that the 20% Steelix slot turns into Onix during a swarm in Platinum.
I've always wanted to know more about this mechanic, as I carry mine around with me daily… it always seemed like random luck. Thank you so much!
Cool site, helped me know how many balls to purchase.
This calculator is cool!
what a cool website, thank you for hosting it <:) i hope 2027 is kind to you and your family
I've finally got around to using my Pokéwalker in the last month or so, and through trial and error it looks like I had mostly figured out the correct course of action, but it's superb that you've created this guide, and I can check back here if I get a little confused. Thank you very much!
i like this comment for one reason mainly:
you're not JUST saying its good or bad.
you're giving EVIDENCE!
Mines pretty cool, i like venonat and tapu lele
Thank you for giving a way to keep using the shiny Umbreon style! It was always my favorite.
religious fanatics are the worst. my condolences to people who have religious fanatics as their parents…
Trying to catch Shadow Electabuzz in a Luxury Ball, calc says 62.424% with para. wish me luck
Wandered here from your other amazing pages and really loved what I found! I usually prefer when Pokemon don't talk but your story really used it well. The ending is gonna stick with me definitely.
This was very interesting and informative. Thank you for sharing your experiments with us!
Thank you so much for taking the time writing this page and all the other articles you have on this website. This has pretty much become my go-to resource for whenever I'm looking for in-depth information on these games.
Umm, just some world-building stuff. Also, I don’t really know how to write my battles. I’ll link a doc filled with my ideas. Thank you for responding. 🙂 https://docs.google.com/document/d/13_7J2IB1TqomDSWY_VgpGr8e2D_axqkqJoY0pWf_Fhc/edit?usp=drivesdk
Oh so thats how it works