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Well, I don't think Curse was that morbid… but then again, I like anything dark cruel and torturous. O_o;;
Well written story, Butterfree :} I love your work!
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Mew: No, I couldn't really do that; Spirit has already used a Ghost-type Curse and it was there shown completely differently, besides that it would just be a random complication that has nothing to do with anything and would say nothing of interest the one-shot hasn't said already.
Torture makes for a good piece of fiction.
Oh, yeah. i recently got super smash bros. off of virtual consol. it iz awsum! ^_^
Hello, People!!!! Butterfree, very well-written one-shot. i personally think that you should put in that curse logic into TQFTL.
"I only torture characters I like."
That's either great or, uh, something.
Then again, as someone who will torture characters regardless of whether I like them or not, perhaps I shouldn't speak.
o.O A Dragonite defeating all Pokémon ever and never getting hurt wouldn't exactly make for a very interesting work of fiction.
Why do people always act so mortally offended when something bad happens to fictional characters? Bad things happen to fictional characters because that is what makes fiction interesting, not because the author has anything against those characters. I only torture characters I like.
I hate this! I want one with Dragonite not being hurt! Just one dragonite that defeats all pokemon ever! And can't be hurt!
As you can tell by now, I'm taking Serebii by storm, and I noticed I can re-register for tCoD. I'm not going to try unless you think I'd be decent to return. PLEASE reply.
Read curse… yesterday, I think it was? That was just… creepy. Although I myself have only ever used the Ghost-type Curse(and not that often), its easy to picture the loss of soul that might come with the Normal/other than Ghost-type Curse.
Intriguing by all means; however, I personally found it difficult to distinguish the reverse-chronological order of the Morty flashbacks. Then again, I didn't have time to read the whole thing in one sitting, so that may have been part of the problem. Regardless, great story.
Wow, that was very good. It sure portrays the effects of the curse well. And I loved the morbid bits, even though I wish there was even more morbidity.
Morbid, indeed. ._. Good thing I don't like to use Curse… Very good, otherwise.
Very morbid, but that's what makes it so good. =P I never thought of Curse that way, and now I'm a bit 'fraid to use it…
I could totally imagine Dragonite drawing a pentagram during that chanting…
Maybe a little. Minus the fact that Kari is all best buddies with her Pokémon. :P They do look kind of alike in my head, but then again that's just because they're both sort of based on the Crystal girl.
Kari kinda reminds me of May.
Sorry to comment again, but lol, I just realized this reminds me of something: Voldemort's Horcruxes XD, maybe that's why I liked the last books so much =P
Wow, that was awesome, but creepy too… Poor Dragonite….
That plot would be awesome for a book, though, it's a very interesting concept, I feel like writing a longer fan fic about it, but I don't want to steal it from you XD
That was… interesting! Never thought of curse looking like that, and I get how ghosts can use it unharmed because of that Morty flashback. It took me a moment to figure out one of those Morty flashbacks, but it was good. So that Snorlax was pretty much "soulless". Huh. Morbid, but I like it!
