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Welcome to the Cave of Dragonflies guestbook.

Off-topic discussion is allowed, but spam is not; please make sure all your messages are of substantial meaning that at least somebody would be interested in reading and responding to. That being said, obviously I appreciate comments relating to The Cave of Dragonflies, whether they are error reports, questions, suggestions or whatever else you might want to get across.

Messages

My own messages will be signed as Butterfree, with the Admin label below my name. If someone signs as Butterfree without that label, it's probably not me.

Kevin

Mia looks like a boy…

Squornshellous Beta

Ah, okay.

Butterfree
Admin

I drew that after chapter eleven, when he'd just been kidnapped and did have a red scarf tied over his eyes.

Squornshellous Beta

Why does Gabriel have a sash over his eyes?

Tsutaja

I don't know if anyone's interested, but im changing my screen name back to Mew.



mweeheeheehee…

Butterfree
Admin

I've only drawn her and Gabriel (and made an attempt at Will), since I generally fail at humans.

Mudskipper
Commenting on: 05-31-10

Hm, thanks for the clarification. Clearly it's been a while since I read the chapter that explained the Slugma morph attributes.



Come to think of it, I wouldn't be surprised if every one of the morphs ended up dead at the end. Guess I'll have to wait to find out, though.

Squornshellous Beta

Huh, she looks different than I expected. Drawn the others too?

Butterfree
Admin

Her feet are clawed and mostly Scyther-shaped - they're mentioned once in chapter five or so, I believe. I drew her a while ago, if that helps.

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i mustve read wrong, i thoght she looked up and was shot in the front. and the scythe thing was an idea. but its odd, i can imagine them all in my head. i have a question- in the beginning, it said mia might come out with deformed legs, but it never said or hinted if she actually did. did she turn out with them?

Squornshellous Beta

This is rather random, but I think that Tsutaaja and its evolutions might be in the Dragon Egg Group. All Pokémon based on snakes so far have been (Ekans, Arbok, Seviper) and of course Tsutaaja is a snake. This could be another possible piece of evidence for a Grass / Dragon final form.

Butterfree
Admin
Commenting on: 05-31-10

I only said I didn't fully decide who was going to die until I was writing the chapter, not that I knew nothing at all - Mia was the one who was definitely going to die (specifically, shot from behind with a psychotic grin on her face after finally indulging her innate bloodlust and murdering a guy - that was one of those little scenes I have floating in my head way before I ever write them down).



It probably should be in spoiler tags, but since everybody's spoiled it already and there is no comment editing, eh. :/ I mean, I could make a special feature to let me edit the comments, but it would take an awful lot of time.

Starshine
Commenting on: 05-31-10

As soon as I began the chapter, I knew someone would die, but I still wish it wasn't Felicia and Will :( But you are an amazing writer, and I need to know how this ends!



Also, I read A Series of Unfortunate Events too XD

elementalpenguin
Commenting on: 05-31-10

Wait, Mia wasn't planned to die? I feel like she must have, although Will and Katherine, as the characters I see as the least developed, fit perfectly.

Happy

I always read a story (or comic, where applicable) before the comments, simply because it's kind of hard to talk about what's happening without mentioning what happened. =u= For me, that extends to include the guestbook, too.

Jahu

…Shouldn't this all be in spoiler tags for the poor, depraved people who haven't read Morphic? >_>;



~Jahu

Butterfree
Admin
Commenting on: 05-31-10

His skin isn't made of lava; it's pathetic, warmish, gooey slime that couldn't burn its way through anything. However, that's because his Slugma cells have been starved all his life and hence don't produce the heat they normally would. Once he figures out the whole absorbing-minerals thing, it gives his Slugma part the energy to start becoming actually useful and give him actual powers, which he'd never had before.



Even if Mia's scythes were strong enough to deflect bullets and she were somehow superhumanly fast enough to actively block a bullet that's flying towards her, that wouldn't matter because she was shot in the back of the head with no warning. She was dead before she even knew somebody had come in behind her. Blocking simply doesn't enter into the equation.

Squornshellous Beta

Scyther's blades aren't strong enough to stop a bullet at point-blank range, let alone oh a half-Scyther where they are likely as not somewhat weakened.

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i liked mia… how could SHE die? she cudda used her blades as a shield…. you should make sprites of them! <:D

Mudskipper
Commenting on: 05-31-10

Well, it's not like I didn't expect anything to go wrong in the rescue attempt. I just didn't think it would be such a bloody massacre. And the part with Felicia was the worst of all.



Also, if I were captured and my skin were made of lava, I think my first instinct would be to burn my way out. I'm surprised it took the Slugma kid so long to think of it.

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