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so it was kind of incomprehensible as a joke and you didnt need to make a page EXPLAINING the joke like you're a huge genius. for god's sake just put a big tentacle on the site and call it a day.
a new splash page thank you
that wasn't so hard was it?
Knew it!
Too bad you didn't have a chapter to show us though, that would have been nice…
Anyhow, looking forward to reading the sequel!
That April Fools joke…
<3<
After this, pretty much the only thing to do to top it would be to, next year, release the real one, then "admit" that is fake, and release the "real" one.
OMG THAT DOOR IS MADE OF PINE.
I have already sworn to make this a meme in my household. I have never lol'd so hard at anything.
I knew the last one wasn't real, I had suspected that you'd do an april fools chapter (I just thought it was going to be tqftl), I'm also certain that this is another April fools joke.
My brain fairly exploded upon contact with the next Morphic chapter.
I would probably be swearing much more than Dave if that was happening to me…
It was well done, just….I keep wondering where you're going with this, as it is vaguely reminiscent of those old anime episodes where all the main characters die several times and somehow manage to come back to life. Except, you twisted this with a large amount of dark humor…
Final Comment: Whoa. O_O
Kratos: Oh, wow. I laughed way too much at that. My sense of humour, it is refined.
Fixed it, in any case. I can't believe I (and everyone else) didn't notice that before.
Nice splash!
Holy crap. I absolutely love the new chapter of Morphic. What a twist! Keep on writing! :D
I finally got around to marathoning through Morphic and the extras in their entirety at stupid-o-clock this morning, so now I can enjoy all this additional stuff.
I'm a bit too busy to go into extravagant detail about how much I enjoyed it all right now, but… I enjoyed it! :D This new first chapter (amusing as Espeon's version was… pffft Mia) was also quite the interesting read. Figured I should point this out, though:
"Goddamn it. He was fucking scientist. He could do this sensibly."
Much as I'm sure Dave would like to be fucking scientist, especially if Scientist('s wife) could be Cheryl, I do believe you're missing an article there.
"Pregnant pause" is itself a known phrase.
Fixed the typo; thanks. :D
"There was a pregnant pause."
You probably mean this in the phrase "pregnant with meaning," and it is valid, but still strange.
"figmenet of Lucy’s imagination"
A misspelling: It should be spelled "figment."
Otherwise, an enjoyable chapter of a great, realistic fanfic. Although it seems ridiculous now, it is sure to become more coherent later. The fact that Bubbles was so…enthusiastically devout is a clever foreshading to the reveal that it belonged to Isaac Daniels.
…another joke?
Because I don't think you would inject that much deconstruction into your real sequel. I may be wrong, though.
Of course not. It was perfectly grammatically coherent, just ridiculous. And delightfully out of character because Espeon has never read Morphic.
@superbird absolutely not. remember the kissing ten TWELVE year olds? :'D
also, was the april-fools-joke morphic chapter run through google translate a couple of times before being posted, because i think it may have been…
@The scorpion thing
You have a point there. I just find it odd that they used both the types you used.
…Thought so. That last one didn't make any sense.
…I'm remembering the tQFtL April Fool's thing last year. Was that really so far back?
…oh, and ignore the date. No, really. This is not an April Fool's.
