01/23/10: Morphic chapter 12

Kitsune

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Kays, sorry for being nitpicky. ^^

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Butterfree

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Website: The Cave of Dragonflies

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Oops, forgot to edit that. Will do it in a sec.

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Kitsune

Commenting on: 01-23-10

The typo's still there… D: [/OCD]

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Puppys

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Lol,yay. x3 Been so long I forgot 'bout it, and had to read all 12 chapters to catch up. Turns out I missed some too XD Great story. Really starting to feel real, can hardly tell it's not real til I remember I'm staring at a font. xD Great, great story. It's sooooo awesome ^____^

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Sangheili

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Yay! More Morphic! :D

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Butterfree

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Website: The Cave of Dragonflies

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Yeah, at the speed she's aging, she's equivalent to a normal seventeen or eighteen-year-old.

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Meowzie-chan

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Woah, one of them is learning to drive? Is that because she's aging faster than a normal kid, or no? It strikes me as a little bit odd, but oh well.



Whenever I think of her, for some reason I always thinks she's a Roserade, not a Roselia. *shrug*

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Kitsune

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Yay, more Morphic! Jean, Will and Mia make me smile. X3 There's a grammatical error, thpugh: "…but didn’t wait for Jean to voluntarily give her the cellphone before he’d torn it out of her hand." The first "her" is referring to Jack, so it should be changed. Anyway, awesome job! The story's really getting intense!

Whoa. Mew spammy. =o

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Bob

Commenting on: 01-23-10

Also ohmaigawd really? Awesome.

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