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Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 6

Shadowdart is a rapist... Wait, do Pokémon rapists exist in the Pokémon world? (Shadowdart you make me sick)

[08/02/2010 08:22:01]

Steele
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 3

All the characters seem to die.....Stormblade, as you are my favorite character, I feel sorry for you. ;_;

[08/02/2010 08:07:57]

Maboroshi
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

An amazing work. It seems like Shadowdart was becoming a Pokemon Hitler towards the end. a truly unforgettable lesson about the corruptions of power.

[19/08/2009 06:08:56]

SilverLatios47
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 4

When Stormblade went back to Pearl's body, it made me cry a little.

[15/06/2009 22:45:56]

Astrid
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 1

I have found thatyour spin-offs of the lives of three Scyther really intriguing to read, and they have drawn me into anoyher phase of having a particular favourite Pokemon. I love drawing, and had to look at lots of Scyther images to get my drawings right, Dragonfree. I'm sure you'd love to see my various little drawings.
-- Astrid King ;)

[07/05/2009 12:52:25]

shadow_lugia
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 6

Um, I just realized after reading this for the fifth or so time, that Scyther don't hunt before First Prey.

How, then, do they eat for the year before their First Prey?

Reply: I answered this in Ask the Author at the forum sometime. They rely on sharing the prey of other Scyther, frequently their parents but it might also just be older Scyther whose acquaintance they've made. It's something I really ought to have depicted in the story in some form but wasn't really thinking enough about.

[12/04/2009 04:24:24]

Holographic
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

This is so sad. It made me cry a few times

[11/01/2009 20:28:30]

Teraunce
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

Interesting and sad, this and its prequel. both get 10 outta 10.

[28/10/2008 10:40:13]

elyvorg
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

So I thought you might be interested to know that I've just re-read the Shadowdarty parts of this on some random whim. And despite it being several months later than my first reading, the ending still managed to make me cry.

[13/08/2008 15:32:36]

Charizard702
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

cool

[04/07/2008 22:27:09]

1derman
Story: The Fall of a Leader
Chapter: 7

Truly a Masterpiece.

[29/06/2008 16:24:41]

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